A Comment/Review on Grafton Savannah’s “HypNelly at the Beach”
Just as the title says, today I’ll be talking a bit about Grafton Savannah’s erotic hypnotic short story HypNelly at the Beach. Synopsis below:
HypNelly convinces a couple at the beach to give her a foot massage.
Grafton Savannah is a relatively new author at the EMCSA. The author has published five stories so far, three of which star this femdom hypnotist known as HypNelly. I decided to read this one today to give some support to a fellow writer and these are my impressions and notes.
This is a foot fetish story that has only three characters in it: James, his wife Jen, and the titular hypnotist who’s quite the naughty girl. She begins by putting Jen into a state of deep relaxation, then convinces James to rub his wife’s feet, and finally takes control of their minds, seducing them into sexual rapture and making them worship her. Yeah, she’s bad, and we love bad in this fantasy land. I’ve said a few times in the past that feet aren’t really my thing, but I can work with the theme to some extent, mostly in my captions work. The hypnosis scenes are pretty standard but the sort flows nicely from beginning to end with only one or two odd phrases here and there.
Overall, I enjoyed it, although I think I would have preferred a different POV. The story is narrated by James so we see everything from his perspective. Third-person is more my style but I get why people enjoy reading and writing in first-person. The stylistic choice doesn’t detract from the seductive tale being played out and if you like femdom hypnosis and feet, you can’t go wrong with this tale.
Thank you for reading.
