Good Point

Day 106 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2023,  Good Point is a piece about jigsaw puzzles and spirals.


Good Point

The puzzle had nothing in common with the box art image and Eric was upset.
“Fuck!” he exclaimed.
“You don’t like it?” Karen asked.
“No: I bought a fantasy landscape, not a rainbow spiral.”
“And yet the spiral makes all your fantasies come true,” she purred.
“Good point,” he nodded, sinking happily under her control.


How this story came to be

Random impromptu that combines my love for jigsaw puzzles (even though I stopped assembling once I started having pets in the house) and beautiful colors. Spirals are classic hypnosis props and I like them too, so… match made in heaven?



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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