CYOA Wednesday [A Day to Learn to Let Go 11]

If you liked my story A Night to Remember to Forget, you’ll be happy to know a spiritual sequel started today on my Patreon. It will be presented in CYOA format like the original and it’s entitled A Day to Learn to Let Go . All members (free and paid) can read it and vote on how they wish to see the plot proceed. Synopsis below:

Meredith’s long dream of organizing a series of BDSM conferences and workshops is finally coming to fruition. Mistress Susan is one of the guests of honor, with a workshop dedicated to hypnotic BDSM. What fun happenings will ensue?

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Read the eleventh segment below:

11 – Triggers and Suggestions

Mistress Susan leaned forward, drawing herself up to her full, imposing height, her silhouette outlined by the low lights that circled the stage. The audience, already cowed by her previous demonstration, seemed to shrink further into their seats. The silence was total, as if the room itself held its breath to better absorb her next words.

“Let’s discuss something critical,” she announced, her voice dropping to a register that cut through the room with knifepoint clarity. Gone was the gentle cadence of aftercare. Her tone now carried an ironclad promise of authority. She was more commanding than ever and that was fucking hot. “Consent is the most important part of hypno-play, of course, but so are two other things – triggers and suggestions. They constitute the literal architecture of hypnotic power exchange. Get this wrong, and everything else crumbles. Get it right, and you unlock a realm of possibilities unlike any other.”

She paused, letting the words echo outward, watching as the meaning took root in the faces before her. Her gaze roamed the crowd, pausing here and there as if handpicking her disciples from among the hopeful, the skeptical, and the oblivious alike. Rachel, who was now returning to her seat, now radiated a new composure, happy to have served her hypnodomme well.

“Let me elaborate,” Mistress Susan continued. “A trigger is not a prop, not a toy. It’s a key you implant in the subconscious, a way to open and close doors according to the will and contract of those involved. A suggestion is the message you leave inside the locked room – sometimes gentle, sometimes forceful, but always with purpose. And both, in the hands of someone careless, can turn the human mind into a bunker or a battlefield.”

She stopped at center stage, folding her arms. “There are many ways to craft a successful trigger – words, gestures, even certain sensory cues like scent or taste. But all of them depend on the relationship between hypnotist and subject. Trust is the substrate. Without it, you’re just running scripts on a computer that will eventually crash. I have seen people try to brute force their way into someone’s psyche, and the results were ugly. Recoil, confusion, even trauma. You cannot break a mind and expect to build something beautiful in its place if you don’t know what you’re doing. You simply can’t.”

The weight of her words seemed to settle like a blanket over the audience. Someone coughed, then went motionless. Dominic felt the hair stand up on the back of his neck, the logic and stakes of it all snapping into clarity. Meredith just smiled.

Mistress Susan clapped her hands together with a sound so sharp and sudden it ricocheted off the auditorium walls, silencing even the smallest shuffles and coughs among the crowd. The energy in the room, already on a taut wire, snapped to a new level of alertness.

“Let’s make this real. For the next part of my demonstration, I’d like to show you how to implant a trigger and associate a suggestion to it,” Mistress Susan announced, her eyes resting on Meredith. The intensity of her gaze was a challenge, a summons and a dare, all at once.

“Meredith, my dear, what say you? As proud organizer of this wonderful event, would you care to volunteer?” Mistress Susan’s tone suggested that there was only one correct answer, and no one dared say anything otherwise.

Meredith didn’t react right away, her cool exterior masking whatever churned beneath. Her lips parted slightly before settling into a wry smile. “Of course, Mistress Susan,” she said, rising from her seat.

The audience’s anticipation was tangible – some leaned in, others exchanged knowing glances, as if they’d been expecting this moment to unfold all along.

As she climbed the steps to the stage, Meredith’s eyes remained fixed on Mistress Susan’s, a refusal to look away that was both defiance and consent. The stage lights caught her hair, turning it into a halo of copper and fire, while her hands—noticeably steady—hung loose at her sides. Dominic, watching from the second row, tried to inventory the possible outcomes. He knew Meredith well enough to expect that she would never participate in anything that might leave her truly vulnerable, yet he also knew the world of hypnokink was thick with the unexpected, the unscripted, the unrehearsed. Here, in the charged space between Mistress Susan and Meredith, it felt as if the rules of engagement were being rewritten in real time.

Mistress Susan extended her hand, palm up. Meredith accepted, her own hand closing around it with a grip that was neither submissive nor combative, but something an accord between equals who had agreed to play their roles for the benefit of the anxious, hungry crowd.

“Excellent,” Mistress Susan said. She guided Meredith to a high-backed chair at center stage. “Before we begin,” she murmured, “tell the assembly a little about your history with trance. Full disclosure only.”

Meredith crossed her legs, straightened her posture, and looked out at the audience. “I’ve been involved in the scene for nearly a decade, but only on the submissive side of things,” she said. “I’ve never been hypnotized, but I’m curious to say the least.”

“Do you consent to have your mind played with for a while then?” Mistress Susan asked.

“Yes. I know my boundaries and that I can say no to any time. I trust you, Mistress Susan.”

Mistress Susan nodded approvingly. “Thank you, Meredith. Is there anything you particularly wish to experience, or anything that is off-limits today?

Meredith’s response was as crisp as it was revealing: “No humiliation, and nothing embarrassing. I am curious about what it feels like to go under, but I’d rather not be made to bark like a dog or cluck like a chicken.”

The audience laughed in a gentle, but non-mocking way. The joyous sound acknowledged the trope while making it clear that this was not that kind of show.

With the stage thus set, Mistress Susan circled Meredith like a chess master appraising her queen before a decisive move. “Let us begin,” she declared.


To decide what happens next, head over to my Patreon (you can join for free), and vote on the poll there until next Sunday. 

If you’re new to these CYOA stories, here are the basic rules:

1) You can only choose one option;

2) If there’s a tie at the end of the poll, and the competing options can be combined somehow, I’ll do that. If not, I get the deciding vote to keep the tale going.

3) The process continues every Wednesday until the story runs its natural course.

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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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