Trimming
Day 220 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2025, Trimming is a piece about a big hypnotic script.
Trimming
It was the biggest hypnotic script Brian had ever encountered, and Mistress Johanna was counting on him to trim it down.
He dug deep into it, removing superfluous words and unwanted repetitions. He worked for hours, focused on the screen, eyes becoming glassy, until there was only one word left.
Obey.
And so, he did.
How this story came to be
I’m always trimming down these snippets to fit with the 55-word count. Only on rare occasions, do I need to add words because the original concept is too small. Removing the fluff is a good exercise and has taught me a lot about my writing skills over the years.
When it comes tp hypnosis, sometimes you want to be wordy to overwhelm the subject, but trimming the fat also works for others. The sooner you get to the point the faster they’ll drop for you and obey your commands.
Speaking of obeying, you’ll be doing that too now, right? Good.
I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.
