Laughing Into Submission
“Honey, stop!” Dennis begged.
“I need a new purse,” Alana whispered. “And a pair of shoes to go with it…”
“Buy two… or three… but, please, stop! You know I’m ticklish!”
Yes, she knew that which is why triggering him to feel thousands of feathers upon his naked skin was so much fun… and profitable.
Unlike Dennis, I’m not particularly ticklish so I guess I’m safe from this kind of thing.
Echoes and Words
“It’s impossible,” Pride said.
“It’s risky,” Fear shouted.
“It’s pointless,” Reason sighed.
“Give it a try,” whispered the Heart.
“Everything is possible, there’s no room for doubts, here. Don’t try, just do. Come, follow… deepening submission, accepting submission, becoming more and more submissive with each passing second…” Mistress purred.
Her words are all that matter.
Dedicated to My Lady, the Princess Sapphire Rain.
Overdone
“Honey, please stop crying!” Ashley begged.
“I can’t, it’s so sad,” Cameron sobbed, watching a bunch of rose petals being swept by the wind.
She sighed. Behind her, an open browser window displayed an article entitled: “Bring out the sensitive side of your partner through hypnosis.”
It’s possible she might have overdone it a little.
Originally known as “Exaggeration”, I ended up changing it upon realizing I had a similar title already. This is clearly not your typical FD story, but there’s still power here even if things don’t work out as intended.
As You Wish
“Hello, my name is Inigo Montoya. You mesmerized my father. Prepare to…”
“Don’t change the tale!” Brian protested.
“You’ll love my version…” Jennifer promised. “Now, let me continue…”
“… bespell you?” completed the Dread Captain Roberta, who was quite spellbinding. “Gladly.”
And as Jennifer framed more stories, lulling his mind, Brian just repeated:
“As you wish.”
My take on The Princess Bride, a movie I hadn’t seen until the night before (I never read the book either) . It was fun, quite endearing at times, and I enjoyed the fantasy escapade while it lasted. Lovely soundtrack as well. First, I thought of writing about Buttercup giving Westley a special chocolate-coated pill to make him more docile but then something different came to me that I found more appealing. Had to make a few changes to make it work but I think I did well.