Rachel’s In Town

Day 161 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2025, Rachel’s In Town is a humorous piece about a vengeful woman.

Rachel’s In Town

“Dave! Wake up!” Andrew said.
“Huh?” Dave blinked and looked around. “What happened?”
“You tell me. You were eating the carpet just now.”
“No, I wasn’t,” Dave said and then noticed the mess he had made. “Oh, not again.”
“Please explain.”
“Rachel’s in town.”
“Ah.”
His ex. Hypnotist. Vengeful. Do I need to say more?

How this story came to be

A silly impromptu, right down to the ending. Hypnotists are the best girlfriends but also the worst exes. Do you agree?

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