A Comment/Review on Carol J’s “Give and Take”
I’ve mentioned in the past I love supernatural mind control stories. In fact, if I didn’t love them, I wouldn’t have an e-book out there about them, would I? However, this post isn’t about me, but rather about a piece I very much enojyed reading.
The synopsis of Carol J’s newest Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control short story “Give and Take” goes like this: Nico may not have the coin to spend at a whorehouse, but he’s heard that the succubi who work there accept payment in more than just gold. What’s the worry if they want to take a sip of his strength instead?. It’s a very enticing premise for me and I found myself drawn to what exactly a sip of his strength meant in this context.
As the story progresses, it’s stated that rather of feeding on lust alone, Succubi in this universe can sap talents. For a hefty dose of otherworldly pleasures, Nico’s friend Vince lost the ability to use a bow for instance which wouldn’t have been too big of a deal if he wasn’t a hunter. I found this concept quite intriguing and my curiosity was heightened. When Nico starts talking about how good he is with the ladies, I thought the Succubus would play a trick on him and render him impotent or something after having her way with him but what she ends up taking is far hotter as a whole.
Even though it’s possible to make an educated guess as to what it is I’m talking about, I’m not going to outright state it here because it would be a disservice to the story. It’s very well written, has a perfect pacing through and through and the way everything fits together is worthy of a read. As such, the moment you stop reading these lines, you should check it out and enjoy the wonderful atmosphere and the delicious realization permeating it all.
I love Femdom Mind Control stories otherwise this site wouldn’t exist. I love reading good stories and this one fits the bill. My comments have no grades attached to them because I’m not fond of numerical values and whatnot but if I did that, I would definitely give “Give and Take” the highest marks. Well done, Carol J.
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